毕业论文篇幅太多时，能够如何删减篇幅? 除开通过融合语句以外，是不是也有别的方式?

　　Tip # 1: 形容词优先选择(防止专有名词化)

　　先看一下下列范例:

　　We should take into consideration several factors.

　　He must make a decision about what to do.

　　They gave us information about the new research program.

　　上边语句在语法上是完全的正确，但由于不立即应用形容词而挑选该形容词的专有名词型而造成 篇幅变多且不足立即与简约。

　　We should take into consideration several factors. [七个字]

　　He must make a decision about what to do. [9个字]

　　They gave us information about the new research program. [9个字]

　　鲜红色一部分便是专有名词化，我们可以将这些立即用一个形容词更换，提议创作时多留意句式 。

　　We should consider several factors. [五个字]

　　He must decide about what to do. [七个字]

　　They informed us about the new research program. [八个字]

　　形容词专有名词化也有另一个缺陷便是非常容易写成被动语态构造：

　　× The analysis of how X-factor impacts B gene expression was conducted. [11个字]

　　√ We analyzed X-factor’s impact on B gene expression. [八个字]

　　运用把专有名词化转为一个形容词，轻松把语句转成主动语态并取得成功减缩篇幅。

　　假如你搜索普遍的形容词专有名词化，能够发觉一个方式。形容词应用好像“make”和“take”，动名词(verb ing)，或专有名词由-tion，-sion，-ment，-ence，和-ance末尾的，很高概率都是有一个相对性应 形容词， 因此如果你在修改英文时，运用找寻作用找到这种末尾和形容词后调整就可以了。

　　何时该改动形容词专有名词化?

　　有时形容词专有名词化确实是务必或没法防止的，但现阶段我们都是过多应用了。下边留学生作业网(www.cieae.net)列举普遍的应调整专有名词化的状况：

　　1，无意义形容词 形容词专有名词形:删掉无意义的，将形容词专有名词形变换为关键形容词。

　　Joe will conduct research on the impact of the recent drought on local wildlife. → Joe will research the recent drought’s impact on local wildlife.

　　The board will make a decision next week about whether to accept you next week. → The board will decide next week whether to accept you.

　　2，当形容词专有名词形是被动语态构造的主关键词时：找到真实的主关键词，并将形容词专有名词形变换为该主题风格的形容词。

　　The approval of the plan was given by the committee yesterday. → The committee approved the plan yesterday.

　　3，形容词专有名词形两组相连:转换第一个形容词专有名词形为形容词，保存第二个或将其转换成疑惑子句。

　　Their interpretation of the implementation of the institute’s program was insightful. → They insightfully interpreted how the institute implemented its program.

　　First was their introduction of their analysis of dreams by the trauma patients. → First, they introduced how they analyzed the trauma patients’ dreams.

　　4，当主关键词中的形容词专有名词形与谓词的形容词专有名词形时:将2个形容词专有名词形转为形容词，考虑二者的关联并再加上有效的连词(because, when, if, although, even though, despite, etc.)。

　　Her understanding of the situation was evidenced by the quitting of her job. → She understood the situation … she quit her job → When she quit her job, she showed she understood the situation.

　　如今一起来训练今日所学习培训到的改动方法。

　　初阶

　　We made an agreement not to buy the house.

　　They reached the conclusion that we should run a new cohort study.

　　Our review of the test results will begin tomorrow.

　　升阶

　　The discovery of a new planet by the Frankfurt Observatory excited the scientific community.

　　The failure of the staff to organize the festival properly was a disappointment to us.

　　The undertaking of building the new company was complicated by their lack of experience.

　　Answer key:

　　We agreed to not buy the house.

　　They concluded that we should run a new cohort study.

　　Starting tomorrow, we will review the test results.

　　The Frankfurt Observatory discovered a new planet, which excited the scientific community.

　　When the staff failed to organize the festival properly, they disappointed us.

　　They lacked experience, which complicated how they built the new company.