国外Essay写作需要摆脱“中式表达”

那什么是Unnecessary Nords呢？ ·语义赘余（多个单词表达的语义重复） 1.accelerate the pace of economic reform 加快经济改革的步伐？这魔鬼的步伐…… correct:accelerate economic reform reason:accelerate=increase the pace of 2.there are good harvests in agriculture 农业大丰收？你见过工业大丰收吗？ correct:there are good harvests reason:"harvests"implies agriculture 3.the economic development in the future will... “在未来将会……”英文讲究简单明了，不要成天叭叭叭 correct:the economic development will... reason:"will"is sufficient to express futurity ·单词赘余（某个单词不影响整体语义） 1.strengthen the building of national defense 加强国家防建设（的建设） correct：strengthen national defense 2.following the realization of mechanization and electrification of agriculture 随着农业机械化和电气化（的实现） correct:following the mechanization 3.inner-Party democracy is a subject that has been discussed 党内民主是一个已经讨论过（的问题） correct:inner-Party democracy that has been discussed ·介绍型名词（用某一个词介绍另一个词） 1.reforms in the sphere of the economy 经济（领域）的改革 correct:reforms in the economy(economic reform) 2.oppose the practice of extravagance 反对铺张浪费（的行为） correct:oppose extravagance 3.coupled with the factor of price instability 再加上价格不稳定（的因素） correct:coupled with price instability 更多内容可以访问Meeloun（www.lxws.net）教育网。