在硬性条件差不多的情况下,个人陈述就非常关键了.能让招生官在文书中挖掘出【你和其他候选人不同】以及【自身条件与项目培养目标契合】,这两点非常重要.那么如何在personal statement中描述你的学业成绩/成就/期望？

01/直接说你很好，学习很努力

Using those textbooks, I studied hard, received high marks on my exams and earned a scholarship to complete my undergraduate degree at Indiana College, where I graduated with honors.

我非常努力的学习那些书，在考试中获得了高分，并且获得了奖学金。它支持我完成了我在Indiana大学的本科学习，而且我以优秀毕业生资格毕业。

02/比较法，将你自己与同学对比

Since I was among the top of my class, I was one of the handful of candidates chosen to attend the Cambridge Sixth Form Law Conference. 

This gave me a taste of what it would be like to be the top at an undergraduate level.

我在班级中名列前茅，并且成为了参加剑桥第六届法学会议的几个候选人之一。这让我体会到了在本科时成为前几名的感觉。

03/表达你对未来学习的期待

I look forward to classes such as Racial Perspectives on Early Childhood Policy, to which I can speak from personal experience as both a teacher and a mother to understand how to affect change on an early level.

I look forward to using hard data to make radical, positive changes in the educational system and to contribute to the existing body of knowledge.

我很期待接下来的课程，比如儿童早期关于种族的教育。通过这类课程，我可以学习如何从个人的经历出发，以老师和母亲两个角色来理解如何在儿童时期做出改变。我希望可以通过真实的数据来对我们的教育系统做出巨大的、正面的改变，并且对（提高）现在的知识体系做出贡献。