针对国外留学生而言，essay创作并不生疏，今日我就怎样在essay写作中防止措辞反复的难题，与您共享一些essay代写经验与方法。

　　1.省去/删掉

　　有时候在一个语句里省去掉反复的一部分，英语的语法依然恰当。

　　It is much harder to segment markets now than in the 70s.

　　在“than”后省去“to segment markets”。

　　Apple rules mobile devices;Google,the web;Facebook,social media;Amazon,e-commerce;and Microsoft,enterprise software.

　　在Google,Facebook,Amazon和Microsoft后都省去了“rules”。

　　此外有一些词很有可能彻底是出自于习惯性，习惯性地加进语句里的，例如quite,very,actually等。复读自身文章内容时(尤其是诵读时)你一般会注意到这种反复又没过多实际意义的词，能够考虑到删掉一些。

　　2.应用同(近)义词和短语

　　为防止太多应用同一个词，大伙儿还能够使两者之间含意同样或相仿的词与短语。例如negative effects可以用“detrimental impact”或“harmful effects”等来替代。叙述“冷”除开用常用的词cold还能够依据实际水平用微冷(cool,brisk),严寒(chilly),或冰凉(freezing,frigid)来替代。

　　下边一段有关有什么小故事内容最吸引住阅读者的阐述中，创作者用了好多个表明很感兴趣的同义词组(be concerned with,curious to know,be fascinated by)：

　　Other stories captured our readers attention too,of course.People seem to be equally concerned with how social media is retraining human brains and upending social norms.They’re curious to know how artificial intelligence will evolve.And they’re fascinated by what Big Data means for society at large.

　　但采用同(近)意词时，不要在词典里寻找一个近义词就生涩地放进来。假如你没了解这个词,有可能会错误操作。由于每一个词除开字面意思也有延伸的含意，如贬褒，水平,宣布或非正规的等。文学家Stephen King说过：“Any word you have to hunt for in a thesaurus is the wrong word.”(即不可以借助同义词典来找寻想要的语汇)。想轻松地应用适当的词就必须大家平常累积学习培训语汇。

　　3.应用代词或有代指实际意义的词

　　应用代词是普遍的防止反复的方式。例如：

　　Seattle-based Nordstrom looks competitive(despite its setback at the Florida Mall).It’s one of the few retailers still growing store count.

　　还有一些协助取代或省去的词,如former,latter，counterpart。

　　下边的事例里a句应用反复的词，而b句则恰当措辞防止了反复。

　　a.Monti and Renzi could not have been more different in their approaches and personalities.The Monti is a sober academic,while Renzi a flamboyant politician.

　　b.Monti and Renzi could not have been more different in their approaches and personalities.The former is a sober academic,while the latter a flamboyant politician.

　　a.The figure shows that older homeless adults have a greater disease burden than the younger homeless adults.

　　b.The figure shows that older homeless adults have a greater disease burden than their younger counterparts.

　　4.转换句型

　　有一些情况下能够靠句型的转变，如运用随着特性语或应用从句来降低词句反复。比照下边词组中的a与b，应用随着特性语，既表述出姿势或心态随着性发生，又防止了同一主语的不断出现。

　　a.She sat down on the ground.She screamed and yelled in a hideous manner.

　　b.She sat down on the ground,screaming and yelling in a hideous manner.

　　a.The girls looked up at the three Nazi officers who entered the room.The girls were terrified.

　　b.Terrified,the girls looked up at the three Nazi officers who entered the room.

　　除此之外，运用复合句，将单句用从句连词连起来也是一个防止措辞反复的方式。如下边《纽约时报》中的一个事例：

　　a.MIT’s experiment has sparked discussions among admission deans.Some of the deans say they plan to offer similar opportunities for applicants to send evidence to project-based learning.

　　b.MIT’s experiment has sparked discussions among admission deans,some of whom say they plan to offer similar opportunities for applicants to send evidence to project-based learning.

　　学生们在essay写作时常常应用反复的词缘故有二种：第一是学生们习惯性某类叫法或不经意中钟爱应用某一词。例如你复读近期写的一篇文章时，发觉在其中用了好几回finally一词，实际上没有必需，绝大多数是能够删除的。这也是为什么写完文章内容原稿一定要开展编写和改动。第二个缘故是语汇的贫乏和英语的语法应用的不娴熟不灵便，毕竟英文并不是大家的汉语，在许多表述上还是很欠缺熟练掌握，这类状况只能依靠多读，多累积，和多训练来改进。