一篇优秀的留学生Assignment在语言表达上应该是什么样？只是拥有复杂的句式、高级的词汇、大量的短语词组？在小编，留学生Assignment大多属于学术Assignment，并不需要太过华丽的表达，简明生动才是重要的。国外有句话是这么说的：Never use ten words where five will do.那留学生Assignment如何才能做到简明生动呢？下面小编教大家两个技巧。 1、简化句子结构，增强活力和表现力 ①以it，here,or there be开头且指引的是句中的名词，同时句子里常常跟上to be/to do的句子结构，比如it is,it was,here is,there is,therewill be……这些结构往往不再强调句中实际的驱动者成分，把true driver的意义稀释了，而且这种结构通常需要其他关系词来支撑和联接，如who,that and when，进一步dilute你的文章。具体来说，比如： There are some bloggers who seem to have... 这里的thereare把句子的重心放在了模糊的概念there上，而不是句中的true focus，即some bloggers,而且作者还需要加上who这个语法上需要但实际没什么含义的关系词。这样就用了三个不必要的filler words（填充词），另一方面还把句中的实义动词弱化了。顺便提个醒，不要碰到“有”就想到there be句型。 再举一些例子： ✗Wordy：It's fun to editing. ✔Concise：Editing is fun. ✗Wordy：There are many people who write. ✔Concise：Many people write. ✗Wordy：Here are some things to consider： ✔Concise：Some things to consider are: ②适当地把后置定语从句改成前置形容词，比如： ✗Wordy：Do not try to anticipate those events that will completely revolutionize society. ✔Concise：Do not try to anticipate revolutionary events. ③把伴随动作状语改成副词，比如： ✗Wordy：Sympathizing with her concerns,he nodded in response to her complaint. ✔Concise：He nodded sympathetically in response to her complaint. ④“which is”、“who were”等有时可以删除但保留原义且无伤语法，比如： ✗Wordy：We drove down Lombard Street,which is considered the crookedest street in the world. ✔Concise：We drove down Lombard Street,considered the crookedest street in the world. ⑤介词短语改写，比如： ✗Wordy：The opinion of the working group. ✔Concise：The working group's opinion. 2、可以用动词来描述的时候就尽量避开弱化语气的名词化表达 比如当你看到“verb+a/an noun”的组合结构,直接用实义动词来代替该短语，简化句子的同时增强句子活力。Assignment代写例句分享： ✗Wordy：The report gave an analysis of the accident. ✔Concise：The report analyzed the accident. ✗Wordy：Give your post a proofread.